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Woman Writing

PAID CRITIQUE

ARE YOU READY TO TAKE YOUR WRITING TO THE NEXT LEVEL?

Make your first chapter shine with a professional critique!

You’ll receive valuable feedback on:

•    Word usage, verb tense, grammar, punctuation, and spelling

•    Flow, pacing, and clarity
•    Description and using the five senses
•    Character and story world details
•    Dialogue
•    How to tighten and streamline your writing
•    Areas for improvement
•    What you’re doing well! 


First Chapter Critique  $45

What you submit:
Ten double-spaced pages or nine double-spaced pages plus a one-page synopsis.

What you receive:
•    In-document comments using Track Changes in Microsoft Word
•    Written feedback and suggestions
•    Fifteen-minute online appointment to discuss feedback and ask questions

Optional follow-up read-through to assess changes you make: $10


Fifty-Page Critique  $125

What you submit: 
The first fifty double-spaced pages of your manuscript. 

What you receive: 
•    In-document comments using Track Changes in Microsoft Word
•    Written feedback and suggestions
•    Twenty-minute online appointment to discuss feedback and ask questions
•    A free one-page synopsis critique

Optional follow-up read-through to assess changes you make: $25

With more than a decade of critique experience, I can help you polish and prepare your work for submission. I accept most fiction, but my specialties are speculative fiction and young adult. 

Notebook and Pen
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