PAID CRITIQUE
ARE YOU READY TO TAKE YOUR WRITING TO THE NEXT LEVEL?
Make your first chapter shine with a professional critique!
You’ll receive valuable feedback on:
• Word usage, verb tense, grammar, punctuation, and spelling
• Flow, pacing, and clarity
• Description and using the five senses
• Character and story world details
• Dialogue
• How to tighten and streamline your writing
• Areas for improvement
• What you’re doing well!
First Chapter Critique $45
What you submit:
Ten double-spaced pages or nine double-spaced pages plus a one-page synopsis.
What you receive:
• In-document comments using Track Changes in Microsoft Word
• Written feedback and suggestions
• Fifteen-minute online appointment to discuss feedback and ask questions
Optional follow-up read-through to assess changes you make: $10
Fifty-Page Critique $125
What you submit:
The first fifty double-spaced pages of your manuscript.
What you receive:
• In-document comments using Track Changes in Microsoft Word
• Written feedback and suggestions
• Twenty-minute online appointment to discuss feedback and ask questions
• A free one-page synopsis critique
Optional follow-up read-through to assess changes you make: $25
With more than a decade of critique experience, I can help you polish and prepare your work for submission. I accept most fiction, but my specialties are speculative fiction and young adult.